Better but Still Not Good
Unlike the previous book in the series, Temptation, this book had a storyline instead of sporadic plot points peppered between sex scenes. This doesn’t make the book good, though. Many times Sierra felt like little more than ornamentation, as did their newborn baby. The sex scenes are still poorly written. If they were shot in a visual medium, they’d last all of two minutes. Long live the minute men, I guess. One of the most annoying aspects of the story is that each of the three main characters feel the need to be the dominant one in the relationship. Now, if this were a relationship story about a Dom and his subs, then I’d get it. But it’s not. This book has great potential to present a sex-positive representation of polyamory, but it fell far short of that. I suppose I’m giving this book too much thought. At least it had a cohesive storyline that was the focus of the book. That’s a decided improvement over the previous title. The narrators sounded far sexier in this book than in Temptation.